CHRISTMAS PARTY FOR THE MUSE
Eight of us celebrated for Christmas on Wednesday and everyone brought gifts. It was amazing. Thanks to Margaret F. for the poinsettia, to Jim for his Mother’s homemade shortbread, to Wendy for her homemade baking selections, to Monica for the lovely dessert tray, to Ron for the gift-boxed shortbread and to Ellie for the poinsettia and the cheese treats she had made. And special thanks to Jason for telling me he’d given my ebook a five star rating. We had a wonderful time in the company of other writers with food and beverage and written words to feed the soul.
Jim read a Christmas story he wrote entitled “Revenge Of The Christmas Tree”. For the torment of being cut and dragged and stood as a Christmas tree and then dying, the essence of the tree sought revenge and became a menacing ivy that grew at an horrendous rate, enveloping and killing a child. This brought forth many more humans to cut down the ivy. The tree essence then lived in an oak tree and as new humans came to live in the same house, hostilities ceased when they started feeding the oak and taking care of the other plants. It’s good to know the tree never became a serial killer!
I read a rhyming poem called “Christmas Eve” about a young adult living at home and having nightmares all Christmas Eve, and finally realizing they were probably due to the rum imbibed.
Ellie read a short article showing her frustration with female friends in the exercise class at the swimming pool on Christmas Eve. All they want to do is talk, not exercise. But then they bring out refreshments to party with and reach out to make sure Ellie is included and her heart softens.
Margaret F. read excerpts from her book “Unforgiving” relating her acting out after being sexually abused by a family friend and neighbour.
Wendy read a poem about Winter, full of imagery and showing the contradiction between the beauty of the season and the harshness of it, too.
Monica read a memory she wrote, “Saving for Christmas to Spend on Christmas Eve”. She recounts how as a child of about six years of age, she and her siblings in Jamaica would turn a juice can into a piggy bank on New Year’s Day, and then save money all year long. Than on Christmas Eve, they would open the can, count their money, and then all go to the central square in town to buy Christmas presents for their family. The square was decked out for Christmas and full of shops and kiosks and vendors selling to the crowds. It was interesting to learn of customs in another land.
Ron had two pieces to read. The first was his rant, “A Warning Prayer for Bad Dog Owners”, expressing his frustration at dog owners who don’t pick up excrement left by their pets. The second reading was “Christmas Miracle In Walnut Grove”, about meeting his friends to play tennis at decrepit tennis courts in Walnut Grove, and how the state of the courts exasperated the players and brought out their physical and verbal negativities. Then on Christmas Day, there appeared six new tennis courts under cover, complete with a Christmas tree on the center court. They were compliments of a former tennis mate and drinking buddy. Spirits were lifted and everyone played better.
Jason read “Helpless”, Chapter 27 of his novel. This shows Gregg trying to tend his great grandmother who is lying injured under the fallen bookcase. He rights the bookcase and then realizes she hasn’t died and he must call an ambulance. He also realizes Damianos hasn’t taken the Book Of The Nornir and that he will probably be back. Sitting with Grammy, waiting for the ambulance, he doesn’t want her to die as he had. And then Damianos comes back. Jason is still working on his book with an editor he has hired.
Some odds and ends:
I found a word I had to share with everyone, biblioklept. It means someone who steals books. I laughed so hard when I read that.
Just read a fascinating, heartwrenching book, “A Thousand Splendid Suns” about the lives of women in Afghanistan from about 1959 to about 2003. It shows how the changing war scenarios during that time impacted the women, and how they had far more freedom and equality under the Soviet or American invasions than they did under the Khan, or the Mujahideen or the Taliban.
Margaret Moffatt has four articles in the December issue of Today’s Senior Newsmagazine. One is on the history of Yale, one about the Kewpie Doll, one on the Hangman’s Tree in Lillooet, and one on the history of Mistletoe.
I asked the group if anyone had made definite resolutions about their writing for 2013. Ron said he would start coming to Meetings again and get back to working on the history novel he was writing about immigrants to Canada. And Monica said now she is finished her academic pursuits, that she wants to write more and hopes to attend Meetings again too. Margaret F. might be moving into Vancouver’s West End and feels in a state of flux regarding plans. Jim is hoping to submit his romance novel to a publisher as soon as he finishes a re-write of it. The rest of us haven’t made definite plans yet. Maybe by December 31st.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, January 2nd, 2013 at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. In the meantime, I hope everyone has a very Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. And don’t forget to feed your Muse on Christmas Eve!
Lisa
Friday, December 7, 2012
Thursday, November 22, 2012
THE REVIEW
UNDER SURVEILLANCE?
Many thanks to Wendy, Jim and Jason for joining me last night in a Meeting of The Rams. Margaret F. had to work late. Julie has been retiring early as she rises very early with her husband. And Ellie flew to Mexico for some sunshine, which has been very scarce in this neck of the woods. But torrential rains are a good excuse to stay inside and write!
To start, I talked a bit about Kobo and the current contest they have to win design help with book covers if you publish with Kobo Writing Life by Dec. 5th. So I’ve been working to upload another book. I did design two cover pages, one for my novel FIRE and one for HONEY SIGNED THE WAIVER. I had printed them out and showed them to everyone. Jason especially liked all the red and orange in the cover for FIRE. He did his own research on covers down at Chapters and discovered that just walking through the store, what caught his eye the most was the colour red. That is what would draw him to look at a book.
I also passed around my very first Sales Summary from Kobo which I thought interesting. It doesn’t tell you who bought your book, but does give the Postal Code of where it was bought.
Still hogging the limelight, I read first. I had finally rewritten Chapter 12 of NIGEL WINGATE IS DEAD. This is the chapter where Nigel and Dee go into 100 Mile House to get married but are told they have to wait three days after purchasing the licence. They go shopping for wedding rings, and later for a wedding dress for Dee. At all three locations, Nigel witnesses some negative aspects of Dee’s personality. He also notices they are being watched by police. Finally on the way out of town, he opens a bottle of Scotch while he’s driving and takes a long swig.
Jason read next, Chapter 26, Frustrated. Damianos leaves the house carrying the crate with the coveted Book with his burned hands. In excruciating pain, he starts and drives the stolen car down the driveway but loses control and crashes into the ditch. The crate holding the Book had broken and he was dismayed to discover the contents were the “National Geographic Atlas of the World seventh edition” and not the Book of the Nornir. He then called Gregg “That little shite.”
I did some research and the word “Norn” means any of the three goddesses of fate in Norse myth. And the word “Nornir” is the plural.
Jason also told us his hired editor has finished about two thirds of this novel and he seems to have a good working relationship with her. However, he did admit he tends to ignore the praise she gives and focus instead on the negatives. Ah yes. What do we do about human nature?
Wendy read next, her piece called A CHANGE OF PERSPECTIVE. This is a very powerful recount of an experience she had working as a hospice volunteer. She encountered a woman dying of cancer who was angry and verbally abusive to everyone, including Wendy. Wendy was upset by the encounter and tended to avoid her or only visit her when the woman’s family were present. Then as the woman’s condition worsened, Wendy was asked to help hold her as a catheter was painfully inserted, and Wendy saw how the woman had been diminished by her illness and loss of dignity. The whole episode still impacts on Wendy and how she looks at everyone and those approaching death, trying not to judge.
Jim read us Chapter 22 of his second book in the COVENTRY GHOSTS series. Here we see Jason setting up the computer systems to hold the ghost essences of people as they are murdered and their brains are kept in nutrient tanks. His system is invaded by a ghost named Sneferu who also wants to capture Leanne and he comes through to talk to Jason. Sneferu tells him they have put a field of energy around the lab and no human can take him away but that some powerful ghosts want him dead, in order to get Jason’s cooperation in capturing Leanne and Judge Jefferys
.
We then had some discussion on the difference in meaning between upload and download relating to computers. My research today said that upload means transfer of data from a local system to a remote system, and download is the reverse. Good to know for the transfer of ghost essences.
And totally unrelated to anything, here is some trivia regarding The Review. I am now able to view the stats regarding the blog where I post The Review. Since 2007 it has been viewed by people in the following countries, listed most frequently to least: Canada, USA, Russia, Germany, France, Netherlands, New Zealand, Latvia, Spain, Malaysia, Israel, and the Ukraine. We are being watched!
Our next Meeting will be Wednesday, December 5th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. This will be our last Meeting before Christmas so if you have any writing on that holiday topic, feel free to bring it along to read to us. Wendy said she would bring some treats. Look forward to seeing you then.
Lisa
Many thanks to Wendy, Jim and Jason for joining me last night in a Meeting of The Rams. Margaret F. had to work late. Julie has been retiring early as she rises very early with her husband. And Ellie flew to Mexico for some sunshine, which has been very scarce in this neck of the woods. But torrential rains are a good excuse to stay inside and write!
To start, I talked a bit about Kobo and the current contest they have to win design help with book covers if you publish with Kobo Writing Life by Dec. 5th. So I’ve been working to upload another book. I did design two cover pages, one for my novel FIRE and one for HONEY SIGNED THE WAIVER. I had printed them out and showed them to everyone. Jason especially liked all the red and orange in the cover for FIRE. He did his own research on covers down at Chapters and discovered that just walking through the store, what caught his eye the most was the colour red. That is what would draw him to look at a book.
I also passed around my very first Sales Summary from Kobo which I thought interesting. It doesn’t tell you who bought your book, but does give the Postal Code of where it was bought.
Still hogging the limelight, I read first. I had finally rewritten Chapter 12 of NIGEL WINGATE IS DEAD. This is the chapter where Nigel and Dee go into 100 Mile House to get married but are told they have to wait three days after purchasing the licence. They go shopping for wedding rings, and later for a wedding dress for Dee. At all three locations, Nigel witnesses some negative aspects of Dee’s personality. He also notices they are being watched by police. Finally on the way out of town, he opens a bottle of Scotch while he’s driving and takes a long swig.
Jason read next, Chapter 26, Frustrated. Damianos leaves the house carrying the crate with the coveted Book with his burned hands. In excruciating pain, he starts and drives the stolen car down the driveway but loses control and crashes into the ditch. The crate holding the Book had broken and he was dismayed to discover the contents were the “National Geographic Atlas of the World seventh edition” and not the Book of the Nornir. He then called Gregg “That little shite.”
I did some research and the word “Norn” means any of the three goddesses of fate in Norse myth. And the word “Nornir” is the plural.
Jason also told us his hired editor has finished about two thirds of this novel and he seems to have a good working relationship with her. However, he did admit he tends to ignore the praise she gives and focus instead on the negatives. Ah yes. What do we do about human nature?
Wendy read next, her piece called A CHANGE OF PERSPECTIVE. This is a very powerful recount of an experience she had working as a hospice volunteer. She encountered a woman dying of cancer who was angry and verbally abusive to everyone, including Wendy. Wendy was upset by the encounter and tended to avoid her or only visit her when the woman’s family were present. Then as the woman’s condition worsened, Wendy was asked to help hold her as a catheter was painfully inserted, and Wendy saw how the woman had been diminished by her illness and loss of dignity. The whole episode still impacts on Wendy and how she looks at everyone and those approaching death, trying not to judge.
Jim read us Chapter 22 of his second book in the COVENTRY GHOSTS series. Here we see Jason setting up the computer systems to hold the ghost essences of people as they are murdered and their brains are kept in nutrient tanks. His system is invaded by a ghost named Sneferu who also wants to capture Leanne and he comes through to talk to Jason. Sneferu tells him they have put a field of energy around the lab and no human can take him away but that some powerful ghosts want him dead, in order to get Jason’s cooperation in capturing Leanne and Judge Jefferys
.
We then had some discussion on the difference in meaning between upload and download relating to computers. My research today said that upload means transfer of data from a local system to a remote system, and download is the reverse. Good to know for the transfer of ghost essences.
And totally unrelated to anything, here is some trivia regarding The Review. I am now able to view the stats regarding the blog where I post The Review. Since 2007 it has been viewed by people in the following countries, listed most frequently to least: Canada, USA, Russia, Germany, France, Netherlands, New Zealand, Latvia, Spain, Malaysia, Israel, and the Ukraine. We are being watched!
Our next Meeting will be Wednesday, December 5th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. This will be our last Meeting before Christmas so if you have any writing on that holiday topic, feel free to bring it along to read to us. Wendy said she would bring some treats. Look forward to seeing you then.
Lisa
Saturday, November 10, 2012
THE REVIEW
SUNNY OUTLOOK
Our Meeting Wednesday night saw the rainclouds clear away for the first time in many days. Was that portentous for our writing? Jim, Wendy, Ellie and Jason all joined me and our readings and discussions went on till about 9:30. We had a great time!
Jim read first, his Chapter 21 in the second book of Coventry Ghosts. He thought it too long and wanted to cut it into at least two chapters, perhaps three. This chapter has Leanne, Sara, Robin and Laurie ‘popping’ into Drakko, the ‘penal/retirement colony’, to bring Susan back to ghostdom after her sentence from the Judge of the Ghastly Court has been served. In Drakko, everything moves much slower and ghosts are drained of their energy. While there, the group meets Moog and Shei, ghosts from entities of the pre-human form on earth, who have been in Drakko forever. Once back in ghostdom, Sara takes Susan to meet her friend Karly at the library.
Ellie has started a new novel based on the theme of a short story she had earlier read to us. It’s about two young female teachers just starting their first teaching jobs and deciding to rent a house together. The female narrating the story has a horse and rashly commits them to renting property in the country with a first class barn and a dirty, dingy house. And we already see the menace projected toward her by the landlord. This could be a real thriller.
Jason read his Chapter 25, “Alals”, where Ligeia reads about the history of her ancestors and she learns of the spells she could cast on Gregg, the jivita. One could make him vulnerable and one could make him her lover forever. And, of course, we are left wondering which she will choose?
I read a thousand word personal account “A Change of Perspective”, telling of an episode where my first husband intervened to stop an episode of domestic violence next door. Upon his return to our home, I learned the perpetrator had been the wife. The husband left in the ambulance while she was taken away in the cop car.
Margaret Moffatt has three articles in the November issue of Today’s Senior Newsmagazine. One is on the history of travel trunks, one on the history of Prince George, and the third is on the history of Lytton.
My eBook, “Love Found” is now for sale at http://Kobobooks.com/search/search/html?q=9780991739608
Two copies have sold (best seller?) and I was able to find out who purchased them. Jason admitted to being one of the buyers, which he purchased with his Apple apparatus. He said it was cumbersome to open and read with Apple, which doesn’t like to co-operate with anything un-Apple. The other buyer was my Aunt/Godmother, Ellis Friesen, who is probably into her tenth decade in this realm and actually has an eReader and knows how to download digital books! She emailed me to say she had read it three times and just loved it and was bragging about me to all her friends! Wow! Now I’m bragging about her!
I also brought up the fact that Douglas & McIntyre Publishing Group, which includes Greystone Books, had filed for bankruptcy protection. They are one of Canada’s largest independent book publishers with offices here and in Toronto. What is so scary about this is that all the authors having contracts with them are now left in limbo. They are not employees and have no further rights than other unsecured creditors. And regaining their copyrights might be a difficult challenge for them as well. Something to think about. Perhaps it would be prudent of authors about to sign contracts with publishers to do a credit check before signing?
While downloading books from the library one day I came across a mystery by Ruth Rendell entitled “Babes In The Wood”, which is the working title Margaret F. has been using for her book in progress. Even though the two books are far apart in content, the fact the titles would be the same could be confusing to readers. I did mention this to Margaret. I think I will want to do a title search for anything I am about to publish before I lock in the title chosen.
Julie was unable to attend due to another commitment. Lorelie had to go to Kentucky to care for her ailing mother. Margaret F. was packing and leaving for a trip to California. Marilyn Sergi had wanted to attend after many years of absence, but didn’t make it as something else intruded on her plans.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, November 21st at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Hope to see you then. And in the meantime, be sure to buy a poppy to remember our fallen and to honour our Veterans!
Lisa Hatton
Our Meeting Wednesday night saw the rainclouds clear away for the first time in many days. Was that portentous for our writing? Jim, Wendy, Ellie and Jason all joined me and our readings and discussions went on till about 9:30. We had a great time!
Jim read first, his Chapter 21 in the second book of Coventry Ghosts. He thought it too long and wanted to cut it into at least two chapters, perhaps three. This chapter has Leanne, Sara, Robin and Laurie ‘popping’ into Drakko, the ‘penal/retirement colony’, to bring Susan back to ghostdom after her sentence from the Judge of the Ghastly Court has been served. In Drakko, everything moves much slower and ghosts are drained of their energy. While there, the group meets Moog and Shei, ghosts from entities of the pre-human form on earth, who have been in Drakko forever. Once back in ghostdom, Sara takes Susan to meet her friend Karly at the library.
Ellie has started a new novel based on the theme of a short story she had earlier read to us. It’s about two young female teachers just starting their first teaching jobs and deciding to rent a house together. The female narrating the story has a horse and rashly commits them to renting property in the country with a first class barn and a dirty, dingy house. And we already see the menace projected toward her by the landlord. This could be a real thriller.
Jason read his Chapter 25, “Alals”, where Ligeia reads about the history of her ancestors and she learns of the spells she could cast on Gregg, the jivita. One could make him vulnerable and one could make him her lover forever. And, of course, we are left wondering which she will choose?
I read a thousand word personal account “A Change of Perspective”, telling of an episode where my first husband intervened to stop an episode of domestic violence next door. Upon his return to our home, I learned the perpetrator had been the wife. The husband left in the ambulance while she was taken away in the cop car.
Margaret Moffatt has three articles in the November issue of Today’s Senior Newsmagazine. One is on the history of travel trunks, one on the history of Prince George, and the third is on the history of Lytton.
My eBook, “Love Found” is now for sale at http://Kobobooks.com/search/search/html?q=9780991739608
Two copies have sold (best seller?) and I was able to find out who purchased them. Jason admitted to being one of the buyers, which he purchased with his Apple apparatus. He said it was cumbersome to open and read with Apple, which doesn’t like to co-operate with anything un-Apple. The other buyer was my Aunt/Godmother, Ellis Friesen, who is probably into her tenth decade in this realm and actually has an eReader and knows how to download digital books! She emailed me to say she had read it three times and just loved it and was bragging about me to all her friends! Wow! Now I’m bragging about her!
I also brought up the fact that Douglas & McIntyre Publishing Group, which includes Greystone Books, had filed for bankruptcy protection. They are one of Canada’s largest independent book publishers with offices here and in Toronto. What is so scary about this is that all the authors having contracts with them are now left in limbo. They are not employees and have no further rights than other unsecured creditors. And regaining their copyrights might be a difficult challenge for them as well. Something to think about. Perhaps it would be prudent of authors about to sign contracts with publishers to do a credit check before signing?
While downloading books from the library one day I came across a mystery by Ruth Rendell entitled “Babes In The Wood”, which is the working title Margaret F. has been using for her book in progress. Even though the two books are far apart in content, the fact the titles would be the same could be confusing to readers. I did mention this to Margaret. I think I will want to do a title search for anything I am about to publish before I lock in the title chosen.
Julie was unable to attend due to another commitment. Lorelie had to go to Kentucky to care for her ailing mother. Margaret F. was packing and leaving for a trip to California. Marilyn Sergi had wanted to attend after many years of absence, but didn’t make it as something else intruded on her plans.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, November 21st at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Hope to see you then. And in the meantime, be sure to buy a poppy to remember our fallen and to honour our Veterans!
Lisa Hatton
Friday, October 19, 2012
THE REVIEW
DRENCHED IN WORDS?
Wednesday’s Meeting of the Rams was fun and interesting for the six of us who were here, in spite of the constant rain in the forecast. That would be good writing weather, right?
Wendy read first, a poem she had recently rewritten, entitled “Whale Song”. It was a poetic song to recognize the voice of the whales as they lament the loss of sea life and the sanctity of their environment to the depravity of mankind. This was a very powerful piece that validated the song of the whales.
Lorelie read us a letter she had written to a CBC reporter chronicling the true story of having their home built by an unscrupulous contractor and the ensuing legal and insurance and renovation nightmare that resulted. We all encouraged her to write this in story form, complete with characters, shady and heroic, and pivotal scenes with dialogue. And we also want to know the human impact on her and her husband and their marriage from this horror story.
Margaret F. read a poem entitled “Inquest Regarding the Death Of Ross Allen”. It was a long poem, over 1400 words that detailed events and showed how incapable healthcare, police and social services professionals were of preventing the suicide in hospital of a young man who had complained of being depressed. And it shows the horror the mother witnessed of all those people doing so very little to assist her son. It is sad to say that probably very little in the system has changed.
In further discussion with Margaret about her work on “Babes In The Wood”, she informed us she had hired two individuals to sort through all the research she had done through the years and put it all in chronological order for her. Then the rest of us suggested she make the story her own personal one and write it from first person so she could give us the emotion that compelled her to do the research and would allow her to include her own thoughts on what happened.
Jason read Chapter 24, “Destroyer”. We see Ligeia in her tent next to where Jody is captive, and she is perusing a book written by her ancestors in another language, trying to find out what Jody was. We learn Ligeia had murdered her own mother, as was the custom with the syrenes. She eventually learns that by her ancestors, a jivita was called a Destroyer. This was another good chapter of character development and gives us another piece of the puzzle.
I read last, a personal piece entitled “A Thousand Words” telling the background for a man’s picture, in a thousand words, that could not be discerned from the picture. It told of meeting and having an affair with a trucker who was later charged and convicted of sexual assault on his step-daughter, and my honestly not knowing the truth of the matter.
Jim didn’t get to read, because it was 9:00 all too soon. But he will read first at the next meeting.
I have uploaded an ebook manuscript entitled “Love Found” to Kobo and it should be available for purchase in the next week sometime. It is just a small collection of three short stories for $1.99. I did this as a trial run for other ebooks I want to publish with Kobo, just to figure out how to design and format one, and how their process works. I think Kobo is one of the best ebook publishing sites that has happened to Canadian authors who want to self-publish. They are a Canadian company, situated in Ontario. Royalties are 70% and you can stipulate payment in Canadian funds that are deposited directly into your own bank account. If there are any legal issues down the road, everything defaults to Ontario and Canadian law. Their uploading process is very simple and easy to follow. However, I do recommend the Smashwords Style Guide for instructions on inserting a table of contents and internal hyperlinks in your manuscript.
Julie told me she still had a bad cold she couldn’t shake. Amanda had to work late and said she should be at the next Meeting. Ellie said she had bursitis in one shoulder and had injured her upper back. And I haven’t heard from anyone else.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, November 7th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Hope to see you then. Happy Halloween and don’t eat too much candy!
Lisa
Wednesday’s Meeting of the Rams was fun and interesting for the six of us who were here, in spite of the constant rain in the forecast. That would be good writing weather, right?
Wendy read first, a poem she had recently rewritten, entitled “Whale Song”. It was a poetic song to recognize the voice of the whales as they lament the loss of sea life and the sanctity of their environment to the depravity of mankind. This was a very powerful piece that validated the song of the whales.
Lorelie read us a letter she had written to a CBC reporter chronicling the true story of having their home built by an unscrupulous contractor and the ensuing legal and insurance and renovation nightmare that resulted. We all encouraged her to write this in story form, complete with characters, shady and heroic, and pivotal scenes with dialogue. And we also want to know the human impact on her and her husband and their marriage from this horror story.
Margaret F. read a poem entitled “Inquest Regarding the Death Of Ross Allen”. It was a long poem, over 1400 words that detailed events and showed how incapable healthcare, police and social services professionals were of preventing the suicide in hospital of a young man who had complained of being depressed. And it shows the horror the mother witnessed of all those people doing so very little to assist her son. It is sad to say that probably very little in the system has changed.
In further discussion with Margaret about her work on “Babes In The Wood”, she informed us she had hired two individuals to sort through all the research she had done through the years and put it all in chronological order for her. Then the rest of us suggested she make the story her own personal one and write it from first person so she could give us the emotion that compelled her to do the research and would allow her to include her own thoughts on what happened.
Jason read Chapter 24, “Destroyer”. We see Ligeia in her tent next to where Jody is captive, and she is perusing a book written by her ancestors in another language, trying to find out what Jody was. We learn Ligeia had murdered her own mother, as was the custom with the syrenes. She eventually learns that by her ancestors, a jivita was called a Destroyer. This was another good chapter of character development and gives us another piece of the puzzle.
I read last, a personal piece entitled “A Thousand Words” telling the background for a man’s picture, in a thousand words, that could not be discerned from the picture. It told of meeting and having an affair with a trucker who was later charged and convicted of sexual assault on his step-daughter, and my honestly not knowing the truth of the matter.
Jim didn’t get to read, because it was 9:00 all too soon. But he will read first at the next meeting.
I have uploaded an ebook manuscript entitled “Love Found” to Kobo and it should be available for purchase in the next week sometime. It is just a small collection of three short stories for $1.99. I did this as a trial run for other ebooks I want to publish with Kobo, just to figure out how to design and format one, and how their process works. I think Kobo is one of the best ebook publishing sites that has happened to Canadian authors who want to self-publish. They are a Canadian company, situated in Ontario. Royalties are 70% and you can stipulate payment in Canadian funds that are deposited directly into your own bank account. If there are any legal issues down the road, everything defaults to Ontario and Canadian law. Their uploading process is very simple and easy to follow. However, I do recommend the Smashwords Style Guide for instructions on inserting a table of contents and internal hyperlinks in your manuscript.
Julie told me she still had a bad cold she couldn’t shake. Amanda had to work late and said she should be at the next Meeting. Ellie said she had bursitis in one shoulder and had injured her upper back. And I haven’t heard from anyone else.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, November 7th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Hope to see you then. Happy Halloween and don’t eat too much candy!
Lisa
Thursday, October 4, 2012
THE REVIEW
THANKS TO THE MUSE!
Thanks to Jason, Margaret F., Wendy and Jim who joined me for a Meeting last night. We enjoyed some good discussions.
Jason brought up our first topic which was professional editing. He said he thought he was ready for an editor to look at his manuscript and give a professional opinion on content, and not proofreading it. He said he felt too close to it to be objective about it after so many years and so many rewrites. Several names of local editors were suggested and pricing was discussed. It was thought he would be better off hiring someone locally rather than over the internet, especially if a local editor would give him a personal appointment to discuss his novel in person. We hope he finds what he’s looking for.
Then Jason read Chapter 23, “Plunder” from his novel. After the fire, Damianos still hears the voice telling him to get the crate with the singed book out of the fireplace. He starts a fight with Gregg and then grabs Gregg’s great grandmother and uses her to knock Gregg over to prevent him morphing into his inhuman self. Then he throws the great-grandmother and pushes the bookcase over on her, grabs the crate and runs off with it. This was a short, tight chapter full of action, and well written, though we did give Jason a rough time over one sentence.
Margaret read a paper she wrote several years ago about the skeletons of two young children found in Stanly Park. It was an academic paper and used a lot of repetition and some quotes of experts to validate opinions. Wendy asked who her intended audience would be for the book she is writing on this topic. If the audience is academic, then inclusion of this piece as is would be fine. But if she wants her audience to be the general public, then some simplification of the writing would give more clarity to it.
Jim read Ch. 18 from the second book of “Coventry Ghosts”. Here we see Jason, the antagonist who captures essences of the dead in his computer, trying to communicate with his dead parents. He has been broken out of jail in Mexico and is now transported by sub to an Asian nation that wants his expertise. He is given a lab and staff and a room full of young, live, men and women chosen to sacrifice their brains for his experiments. They are lawbreakers sentenced to death, but only the brightest ones. I did ask Jim what would happen if the essence of someone with dementia was captured by mistake. He laughed.
After Margaret had told me of the three day delay required after obtaining a marriage licence before a wedding could be performed, I inserted another chapter in front of the actual wedding. This one is in Nigel’s point of view when he and Dee go into 100 Mile House to get the marriage licence and learn of the required 3 day wait. To prevent Dee from going back to work at the Lone Butte Hotel, he agrees to buy her a new dress to marry in and goes shopping with her, noticing they are being watched by the RCMP. It was suggested I add to this chapter and develop Dee’s personality further, showing her darker side.
I also read my re-write of the following chapter, which is the one I had read last time. It shows Edna realizing she will always be wondering if she is being watched by the police for the rest of her life.
Gemma is still dealing with health issues, her own and those of her husband and brother. Margaret Moffatt has been ill, and so has Julie. We wish all three a speedy recovery and good health. Amber said she had to work late yesterday, and Lorelie said she was unable to attend. Hope everyone else is fine and still talking to their Muse. For those who don’t attend because they haven’t written anything lately, please know that isn’t a requirement for your presence at a Meeting. I’m sorry if I made people think that because I’ve said to bring something to read, either your own writing or something about writing. It is also important for the group to function if we have interested parties willing to listen and give feedback to those who do read. We need that interaction to become better readers and writers consciously aware of the intricacies of the written word.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, October 17th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place and please know you are welcome and wanted whether you have written anything or not. Hope to see you on the 17th, and have a very Happy Thanksgiving in the meantime!
Lisa
Thanks to Jason, Margaret F., Wendy and Jim who joined me for a Meeting last night. We enjoyed some good discussions.
Jason brought up our first topic which was professional editing. He said he thought he was ready for an editor to look at his manuscript and give a professional opinion on content, and not proofreading it. He said he felt too close to it to be objective about it after so many years and so many rewrites. Several names of local editors were suggested and pricing was discussed. It was thought he would be better off hiring someone locally rather than over the internet, especially if a local editor would give him a personal appointment to discuss his novel in person. We hope he finds what he’s looking for.
Then Jason read Chapter 23, “Plunder” from his novel. After the fire, Damianos still hears the voice telling him to get the crate with the singed book out of the fireplace. He starts a fight with Gregg and then grabs Gregg’s great grandmother and uses her to knock Gregg over to prevent him morphing into his inhuman self. Then he throws the great-grandmother and pushes the bookcase over on her, grabs the crate and runs off with it. This was a short, tight chapter full of action, and well written, though we did give Jason a rough time over one sentence.
Margaret read a paper she wrote several years ago about the skeletons of two young children found in Stanly Park. It was an academic paper and used a lot of repetition and some quotes of experts to validate opinions. Wendy asked who her intended audience would be for the book she is writing on this topic. If the audience is academic, then inclusion of this piece as is would be fine. But if she wants her audience to be the general public, then some simplification of the writing would give more clarity to it.
Jim read Ch. 18 from the second book of “Coventry Ghosts”. Here we see Jason, the antagonist who captures essences of the dead in his computer, trying to communicate with his dead parents. He has been broken out of jail in Mexico and is now transported by sub to an Asian nation that wants his expertise. He is given a lab and staff and a room full of young, live, men and women chosen to sacrifice their brains for his experiments. They are lawbreakers sentenced to death, but only the brightest ones. I did ask Jim what would happen if the essence of someone with dementia was captured by mistake. He laughed.
After Margaret had told me of the three day delay required after obtaining a marriage licence before a wedding could be performed, I inserted another chapter in front of the actual wedding. This one is in Nigel’s point of view when he and Dee go into 100 Mile House to get the marriage licence and learn of the required 3 day wait. To prevent Dee from going back to work at the Lone Butte Hotel, he agrees to buy her a new dress to marry in and goes shopping with her, noticing they are being watched by the RCMP. It was suggested I add to this chapter and develop Dee’s personality further, showing her darker side.
I also read my re-write of the following chapter, which is the one I had read last time. It shows Edna realizing she will always be wondering if she is being watched by the police for the rest of her life.
Gemma is still dealing with health issues, her own and those of her husband and brother. Margaret Moffatt has been ill, and so has Julie. We wish all three a speedy recovery and good health. Amber said she had to work late yesterday, and Lorelie said she was unable to attend. Hope everyone else is fine and still talking to their Muse. For those who don’t attend because they haven’t written anything lately, please know that isn’t a requirement for your presence at a Meeting. I’m sorry if I made people think that because I’ve said to bring something to read, either your own writing or something about writing. It is also important for the group to function if we have interested parties willing to listen and give feedback to those who do read. We need that interaction to become better readers and writers consciously aware of the intricacies of the written word.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, October 17th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place and please know you are welcome and wanted whether you have written anything or not. Hope to see you on the 17th, and have a very Happy Thanksgiving in the meantime!
Lisa
Saturday, September 22, 2012
THE REVIEW
FIRST DAY OF FALL
Our Meeting on Wednesday was the last one of the summer and today is the first day of fall. Wasn’t all that sunshine absolutely glorious for so many days?
Amber Lyndon joined Jason, Margaret F., Wendy, Jim and me here on Wednesday for her first time with the Rams. Welcome to Amber.
I had received notification from Polar Expressions that my short fiction piece “The End” was accepted for inclusion in their anthology “Setting The Scene”. Final winners of that contest have yet to be determined.
I read first and started with my next chapter in “Nigel Wingate Is Dead” in which I have Deirdre’s mother as witness as Deirdre and Nigel get married by a Justice Of The Peace in 100 Mile. But when I finished reading Margaret F. told me, based on her own experience in the 1960s, that the couple would have had to wait three days after obtaining the marriage licence before getting married. So now I guess I have to re-write that chapter. Details like that are important because you don’t want to turn readers off by getting facts wrong even though you are writing fiction.
Next I read a short piece called “The Memory Of White Wine” remembering an evening getting drunk on white wine when asking my former husband for a divorce. Because I wrote this piece by hand, the words were sparse and I think gave a greater impact to this short story.
Margaret F. also had two readings. The first was her next chapter in “Babes In The Wood” where she documents a newspaper article that was very misleading and also that the coroner said the corpses were one male child and one female child when all the clothing found with them were those only worn by boys at that time. So of course a search for a missing boy and girl would not have turned up information about two missing boys, would it?
Then Margaret read a poem “Sisters” that she had written to her own sister telling her not to give up on her dreams because they are so fragile and can be lost forever if not made manifest by the dreamer. Good warning to all of us.
Jason read Chapter 22 “Mothers” from his novel “Provoked”. In this chapter Gregg is questioning how he could only be part human. His great grandma explains to him that his now deceased Aunt Samantha was his real mother, not Laura, and that Samantha had been raped by some very strange male character named Lucy, who then disappeared. After Laura adopted him, her husband left her and she eventually ended up with Dave’s father. Gregg is trying to come to terms with who and what he may be, when Damianos returns to the room. There’s lots of good background material in this chapter and the story is unfolding nicely.
Amber read the first chapter in her historical novel “The Black Apple” which is set in the lower mainland during the 1800s. It is told from the point of view of the youngest daughter of six, who is eleven years old and blind. She relates the early morning hours one day when her mother woke her and they all left the house silently and secretly until they were far enough away that the mother could explain to her that she had to leave them to right some wrong, and that the child would be taken care of by her sisters. The child was frantic with the feeling of abandonment. We were all keen to know the secrets to be revealed in this story.
Jim read Chapter 19 in the second book of “Coventry Ghosts”. This shows us the ghosts with their first catering contract at a posh home north of Vancouver. Cheri is very nervous about how the ghosts will perform. Cars were lifted and parked by ghost valets, trays of food and drink were carried around by unseen waiters, and live people were dancing with the unseen dead who became translucent phantoms at midnight. But the party was a success. It was so much fun hearing this chapter and envisioning what was happening.
Wendy didn’t read, but had good things to say about all that was read by others. Ellie was unable to attend since she was entertaining guests from Australia. Gemma is still overwhelmed in caring for both her husband and her brother, but said to say hi to everyone and let them know she was thinking of the Rams. Anne Berrie said since her son received his driver’s N, she seldom has use of her car in the evenings. Lorelie had a prior commitment, but said she will attend the next meeting. Margaret Moffatt receives many email notes from people who have read her pieces of history being published in Today’s Senior Newsmagazine, which she assures me she wouldn’t receive if she didn’t include her email address with her byline. I had raised privacy concerns about doing that, but I guess I was wrong. The contact received has all been positive.
Next Meeting will be Wednesday, October 3rd at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Look forward to seeing you then. Happy Writing!!!
Lisa
Our Meeting on Wednesday was the last one of the summer and today is the first day of fall. Wasn’t all that sunshine absolutely glorious for so many days?
Amber Lyndon joined Jason, Margaret F., Wendy, Jim and me here on Wednesday for her first time with the Rams. Welcome to Amber.
I had received notification from Polar Expressions that my short fiction piece “The End” was accepted for inclusion in their anthology “Setting The Scene”. Final winners of that contest have yet to be determined.
I read first and started with my next chapter in “Nigel Wingate Is Dead” in which I have Deirdre’s mother as witness as Deirdre and Nigel get married by a Justice Of The Peace in 100 Mile. But when I finished reading Margaret F. told me, based on her own experience in the 1960s, that the couple would have had to wait three days after obtaining the marriage licence before getting married. So now I guess I have to re-write that chapter. Details like that are important because you don’t want to turn readers off by getting facts wrong even though you are writing fiction.
Next I read a short piece called “The Memory Of White Wine” remembering an evening getting drunk on white wine when asking my former husband for a divorce. Because I wrote this piece by hand, the words were sparse and I think gave a greater impact to this short story.
Margaret F. also had two readings. The first was her next chapter in “Babes In The Wood” where she documents a newspaper article that was very misleading and also that the coroner said the corpses were one male child and one female child when all the clothing found with them were those only worn by boys at that time. So of course a search for a missing boy and girl would not have turned up information about two missing boys, would it?
Then Margaret read a poem “Sisters” that she had written to her own sister telling her not to give up on her dreams because they are so fragile and can be lost forever if not made manifest by the dreamer. Good warning to all of us.
Jason read Chapter 22 “Mothers” from his novel “Provoked”. In this chapter Gregg is questioning how he could only be part human. His great grandma explains to him that his now deceased Aunt Samantha was his real mother, not Laura, and that Samantha had been raped by some very strange male character named Lucy, who then disappeared. After Laura adopted him, her husband left her and she eventually ended up with Dave’s father. Gregg is trying to come to terms with who and what he may be, when Damianos returns to the room. There’s lots of good background material in this chapter and the story is unfolding nicely.
Amber read the first chapter in her historical novel “The Black Apple” which is set in the lower mainland during the 1800s. It is told from the point of view of the youngest daughter of six, who is eleven years old and blind. She relates the early morning hours one day when her mother woke her and they all left the house silently and secretly until they were far enough away that the mother could explain to her that she had to leave them to right some wrong, and that the child would be taken care of by her sisters. The child was frantic with the feeling of abandonment. We were all keen to know the secrets to be revealed in this story.
Jim read Chapter 19 in the second book of “Coventry Ghosts”. This shows us the ghosts with their first catering contract at a posh home north of Vancouver. Cheri is very nervous about how the ghosts will perform. Cars were lifted and parked by ghost valets, trays of food and drink were carried around by unseen waiters, and live people were dancing with the unseen dead who became translucent phantoms at midnight. But the party was a success. It was so much fun hearing this chapter and envisioning what was happening.
Wendy didn’t read, but had good things to say about all that was read by others. Ellie was unable to attend since she was entertaining guests from Australia. Gemma is still overwhelmed in caring for both her husband and her brother, but said to say hi to everyone and let them know she was thinking of the Rams. Anne Berrie said since her son received his driver’s N, she seldom has use of her car in the evenings. Lorelie had a prior commitment, but said she will attend the next meeting. Margaret Moffatt receives many email notes from people who have read her pieces of history being published in Today’s Senior Newsmagazine, which she assures me she wouldn’t receive if she didn’t include her email address with her byline. I had raised privacy concerns about doing that, but I guess I was wrong. The contact received has all been positive.
Next Meeting will be Wednesday, October 3rd at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Look forward to seeing you then. Happy Writing!!!
Lisa
Friday, September 7, 2012
THE REVIEW
SEPTEMBER SUNSHINE
In spite of the lure of lingering summer sunshine, five of us did have a Meeting on Wednesday. Jason, Wendy and Margaret F. joined me in welcoming Lorelie Quiding to the Ram’s Head. She joined in discussions but wasn’t prepared to read anything to us yet.
Margaret F. read her Prologue and Chapter 1 from “Babes In The Wood”. There is a lot of detail here about the beginnings of the case and how disorganized police were in gathering evidence and keeping track of it. This opens many, many questions as to what really might have happened, and when, and by whom, and to whom. Since the slain children still have not been identified, we all want to know as much as possible so look forward to further chapters of Margaret’s.
Wendy read a very dynamic poem entitled “White Wine” that she recently wrote about someone seriously considering suicide through a long night and then deciding to go on living as the sun rises. Her wordage was exquisite and magnified everyday detail in a traumatic instance.
I read Chapter 11 in “Nigel Wingate Is Dead”. It shows Constable Reznick watching in the parking lot of the Lone Butte Hotel when Nigel and Deirdre come out, collect his belongings from his Firebird, and are then accosted by the departing bartender who assumed he had a late night date with Deirdre. When things could turn ugly, Reznick gets out of his cruiser and intervenes. As he learns Nigel and Deirdre are getting married, he wants to know why so soon after the funeral of Deirdre’s daughter. He strongly suspects their marriage will prevent police from learning anything more about the unusual death of the child, but will still contact Vancouver RCMP to see what they know about Nigel.
Jason read two chapters from his novel. In Chapter 20, “Composure”, Damianos is outside the house of Gregg’s great grandmother, looking in the window and seeing the book of secret spells he has been looking for. He is also listening to a commanding voice in his head.
In Chapter 21, “Showdown”, Damianos battles with Gregg over the book, and Gregg throws the crate holding it, into the fireplace. Following the commanding voice, Damianos tries to retrieve the crate but his sleeves catch on fire, and then the home catches fire. He soaks himself in the shower while Gregg and his great grandmother use fire extinguishers to put out the flames. Damianos is still haunted by the voice commanding him to get the book. During this scene, Damianos has called Gregg a jivita, and Gregg wants to know what that is.
Margaret Moffatt has two articles in the September issue of Today’s Senior Newsmagazine. One is “The Hollow Cedar Tree”, about the one in Stanley Park. And the other is about Prince George.
Also in that issue is an article, “Profile Of A Dancer – Charlie Thompson” about a former member of The Ram’s Head, who attended back in 2006 when he was writing his memoirs. He was born in 1919, so it’s good to hear Charlie is still going strong.
Jim wasn’t able to attend as he was busy picking plums at his home. It is harvest time again. We hope to see Jim sometime soon.
Ellie said she was unable to make the meeting, and I haven’t heard from anyone else about attending, or not, lately.
Michael says he needs more time to prepare his presentation on story structure, so nothing will be happening on that front in September. Stay tuned.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, September 19th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Hope to see you then.
Lisa
In spite of the lure of lingering summer sunshine, five of us did have a Meeting on Wednesday. Jason, Wendy and Margaret F. joined me in welcoming Lorelie Quiding to the Ram’s Head. She joined in discussions but wasn’t prepared to read anything to us yet.
Margaret F. read her Prologue and Chapter 1 from “Babes In The Wood”. There is a lot of detail here about the beginnings of the case and how disorganized police were in gathering evidence and keeping track of it. This opens many, many questions as to what really might have happened, and when, and by whom, and to whom. Since the slain children still have not been identified, we all want to know as much as possible so look forward to further chapters of Margaret’s.
Wendy read a very dynamic poem entitled “White Wine” that she recently wrote about someone seriously considering suicide through a long night and then deciding to go on living as the sun rises. Her wordage was exquisite and magnified everyday detail in a traumatic instance.
I read Chapter 11 in “Nigel Wingate Is Dead”. It shows Constable Reznick watching in the parking lot of the Lone Butte Hotel when Nigel and Deirdre come out, collect his belongings from his Firebird, and are then accosted by the departing bartender who assumed he had a late night date with Deirdre. When things could turn ugly, Reznick gets out of his cruiser and intervenes. As he learns Nigel and Deirdre are getting married, he wants to know why so soon after the funeral of Deirdre’s daughter. He strongly suspects their marriage will prevent police from learning anything more about the unusual death of the child, but will still contact Vancouver RCMP to see what they know about Nigel.
Jason read two chapters from his novel. In Chapter 20, “Composure”, Damianos is outside the house of Gregg’s great grandmother, looking in the window and seeing the book of secret spells he has been looking for. He is also listening to a commanding voice in his head.
In Chapter 21, “Showdown”, Damianos battles with Gregg over the book, and Gregg throws the crate holding it, into the fireplace. Following the commanding voice, Damianos tries to retrieve the crate but his sleeves catch on fire, and then the home catches fire. He soaks himself in the shower while Gregg and his great grandmother use fire extinguishers to put out the flames. Damianos is still haunted by the voice commanding him to get the book. During this scene, Damianos has called Gregg a jivita, and Gregg wants to know what that is.
Margaret Moffatt has two articles in the September issue of Today’s Senior Newsmagazine. One is “The Hollow Cedar Tree”, about the one in Stanley Park. And the other is about Prince George.
Also in that issue is an article, “Profile Of A Dancer – Charlie Thompson” about a former member of The Ram’s Head, who attended back in 2006 when he was writing his memoirs. He was born in 1919, so it’s good to hear Charlie is still going strong.
Jim wasn’t able to attend as he was busy picking plums at his home. It is harvest time again. We hope to see Jim sometime soon.
Ellie said she was unable to make the meeting, and I haven’t heard from anyone else about attending, or not, lately.
Michael says he needs more time to prepare his presentation on story structure, so nothing will be happening on that front in September. Stay tuned.
The next Meeting will be Wednesday, September 19th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Hope to see you then.
Lisa
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