THE REVIEW

Re-Writing Class

Charity, Luke, Annette and Jason all joined me Wednesday for our latest Meeting. We started with Charity giving us a demonstration on her laptop of how she uses different MS Word features to supply a list of chapters and scenes and comments that she can use as an outline to find something specific she wants to look at in her manuscript. Luke says he uses Scrivener story writing software. I write an outline manually as I go along, since I like to use the printed page when I edit, rather than the computer. We guess it all boils down to what works best for each writer. But I will spend some time working with the ideas for MS Word. Jason didn’t say what he would like to try, even though he did say trying to remember everything in his head wasn’t working. And we can all relate to that problem.

We did the blind voting for a prize from the box for best writing from the last Meeting and Charity was the winner for her chapter from “Trixie Trouble”.

I read first, a re-write of the story I had read last time. I changed names and places of characters’ origins, and did the storyline inside the framework of a police interview. It is approximately 730 words long, so I will enter it in the Polar Expressions contest/anthology this year.

Luke read us a chapter about the soldier, Dalin, and an encounter he has with his immediate superior. Dalin tries unsuccessfully to convince the other soldier that there is something terribly wrong with the army’s plan to extricate itself from a tight situation. Dalin then talks the female soldier, Sgt. Torch, into telling another officer for him as he is forbidden to do so himself.

Jason read us the next chapter where Tiber is still browbeating Kwen, and threatening to turn her in for stealing the mystical coin. And Damianos is still suffering excruciating pain, but deep inside hears a voice that gives him hope. At the end of the chapter he hears the voice of his stolen sister calling his name.

Charity read the next chapter in “Trixie Trouble”. At the bar she runs into Brett Marley, who makes sexual suggestions. She plays along briefly, but doesn’t give in. She then goes to make her bet on the boxer Grave Digger, asking who will be his challenger in the ring. That’s when she sees the preacher’s son get in the ring as the other contestant.

Both Jason and Charity are very good at ending each chapter with a hook that leaves the reader wanting to keep turning pages to see what happens next.

Annette didn’t read anything, but gave us hints on what the story she read last time would contain going forward.

The next Meeting will be Wednesday, May 18th at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Again, bring your vote for best piece of writing from this last Meeting. I do look forward to seeing you all next time and wish you successful writing in the meantime.

Lisa A. Hatton
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