THE REVIEW

MY APOLOGIES

Charity, Darlene and Annette joined me last night for us to read our work and discuss writing and life in general. Luke said he was busy packing for a forthcoming move and we all know how daunting that can be. Chris would like to make the meetings, but his parenting schedule comes first. We know what that’s like, too. All you can do is just keep writing in the meantime.

My apologies go out to Charity. In the previous Review, I omitted mention of Charity’s reading at the last Meeting, posted the Review and sent out the link to everyone. Charity read it right away and noticed the omission. Later that day, I awoke from a nap suddenly, realizing the mistake I had made and promptly corrected it, including mention of Charity in the Review. But I didn’t send out an announcement about it, hoping no one had read it yet. I was too late. So I apologize sincerely. My only excuse was that I was tired that day, or you can blame it on advancing years. I am sorry.

Last night Charity read first from Trixie Trouble. It was a detailed chapter about Trixie being tied up in the cellar of the saloon. Mundy and Carmen want to know where the rest of the stolen gold is hidden, thinking she knows where it is. They recognize her Pa’s gun. She refuses to tell them anything and they start beating her. The saloon owner arrives and stops the beating. The saloon owner turns out to be Trixie’s Ma. Great way to end the chapter, which had been full of gruesome happenings.

Darlene read the next section of her story “Watering Restrictions”. Ethel is against newly passed watering restrictions because she has a very “artistic” garden. Neighbours think she uses too much water. Her husband Ralph loves his wife but wants to get along with everyone. Ethel starts watering before and after allowed watering times. When a By-law Officer starts watching her sprinkling one day, she offers him a coffee. This story gives us a picture of the challenges home owners in suburbia face during a hot, dry summer.

Annette said she had started writing stories based on her life. She also said it was because I told her she should do so. The title (just this one story or the collection?) is “Bringing Up Grandma”. Annette’s Grandmother died in 2001, and Annette had to read a eulogy at her funeral. We learn Grandma had moved to B.C. from Saskatchewan and lived in the Aldergrove area. She outlived her husband. She loved going to church, and prayer was her answer to most problems. And we also learn she had mothered Annette for the first two years of her life. This is a good depiction of a definite character and we hope to hear more, especially since Annette told us she had left things out!

I read a new short story I wrote last week called “Caller Unknown”. This story is straight fiction. I had used a writing prompt that said ‘tell of ending up with the wrong cell phone’. The story tells of a young woman retrieving a cell phone her friend left behind at a Karaoke bar, and ending up being stopped by police who are tracking the friend through the phone. Charity said she wanted to know more about the point of view character and Darlene wanted to know what had made the two women friends. So that made me realize the story needs more work. I think I want to emphasize how two people from similar backgrounds can make different choices in life and end up going down totally different paths. I usually want to make a point of some kind when I write a short story, whether it’s a true story or not.

The next Meeting will be Wednesday, March 21st at 7:00 p.m. here at my place. Hope to see you then. And if you’re suffering a writer’s block, be sure to go out and kiss the Blarney Stone on St. Patrick’s Day, March 17th!

Lisa A. Hatton
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